Judge The Dead, Rock/Metal Songwriting Critique

by Kyle
(Lexington, SC US)

It's time to shed the blood
The blood of your people
And all who fear the name

It is time to judge the dead

The have defeated by the blood
For they are the ones who accuse him
They have been thrown down to Earth
From the wrath of God

It is time to judge the dead

Terror will come to Earth and sea
For the devil has come to get you

It is time to destroy the Earth