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Jessica Lyrics Critique - Country Song

by Jessica
(Kentucky)

My little boy

My little boy

Picture my little baby boy
He was perfect, pure joy
It was a picture of love at first sight
The first time I saw him in the light

Chorus
In a flash of time, life simply goes by
All in the blink of an eye
Hold on to the precious memories as long as you can
He is growing up to be a man

He hit the first milestones
Drinking milk, building up strong bones
Bumps, bruises, booboos, need a little mother's kiss
I know that is something I'll surly miss
Fighting through new found attitudes
Do it myself, fix it, mine moods
Time slips away as my little boy grows up fast
Wish I had a permanent picture to last

In a flash of time, life simply goes by
All in the blink of an eye
Hold on to the preacious memories as long as you can
He is growing up to be a man

Teenage years hold on tight
Give love, lead him, do not fight
Have faith in times of uncertainty
Time to let go I taught him well
I'm taking a picture of life and living to tell
Little boys are God's gift to Mothers

In a flash of time, life simply goes by
All in the blink of an eye
Hold on to the preacious memories as long as you can
He is growing up to be a man

All grown up now, my little boy, means I'm old
I have lived this long because of this story to be told
I still picture my little baby boy
I see him, I feel him, smell him its joy
My permanent memory picture
The joys of life the perfect mixture
And as you know...

In the flash of time, life simply went by
All in the blink of my eye
Holding on to my preacious memories as long as I could
I closed my eyes proudly, as I, the mother, should
My little boy is all grown up My little boy is now a man







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Jessica Lyrics Critique - Country Song

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Jul 18, 2009
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ohhhhhhhh
by: Sweeetie

U're amazing..

Aug 14, 2009
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amazing
by: Allie

the lyrics clearly show wat ur thinking about and thats wat their supposed to do. so it was totally amazing keep on thinking up songs. even in the worst of times sometimes it helps to put ur feelings into a song

Aug 21, 2009
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great story
by: Lonnie

great story and oh how ture it is. I thought it was good but it didn't seem to flow for me as it should. May I suggest you come back to it after awhile and reread it and polish it up some. I think it could be really good

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