Janmarie Lyrics Critique -- Country Song "Leave"

by Janis Williams
(Puyallup, Washington)

One of many songs I've written. "Leave" to be song by a male singer, soft country flavor with build up to chorus. Melody came with lyrics as I sat down with guitar. Song by Janmarie

Leave
(verse)

I'm gonna leave
whatcha gonna do when I leave?
We can't go back to when
the sun shined on us...
life was all about us,
but baby, there's much more to believe.

I'm gonna leave
I'm doin' you a favor don't you see?
there's a bigger, wider world
outside you and me,
just let me leave.

(chorus l)
I'm gonna leave while the leavin is right
I'm gonna leave with a kiss tonight.
Leave while the feelings are good...
Don't let me be misunderstood,
Just let me leave.

(verse)
I'm gonna leave
you'll be just fine when I leave
The sun shines on everyone
get out there and have some fun,
you can have a world of fun on me.
Just let me leave.


(chorus 2)
I'm gonna leave even though I still love you,
you know, girl, I think too much of you
to keep you all to me...
I'm gonna leave 'tho the leavin' is hard;
life will go on even when we're apart..
beyond the kiss I leave you tonight,
I know you're gonna be alright
after I leave...

Just let me leave.
I gotta leave.