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It ends tonight/I promise - Lyric Feeback

by Sharvinvijay
(Malaysia)

Hi everyone, thanks for the supporting comment from my last ones, Queen of my heart.
Please give your review on this one and my other lyrics; 'Chance for love' and 'Love just to say goodbye'
You can contact me by the e-mail address stated below. Other than that, enjoy and have a pleasant day


It ends tonight/I promise
Sharvinvijay; Malaysia

Breathing gets harder than it seems,
Can't take a glimpse on what I've left, for what I've done,
as I run away...

Drops of pure rain wash my tears away,
No...I need to feel the pain,

Deafening voices keep flipping in my head,
keep telling that I'm going to be alone

(Bridge in faint voice)

Here I am,
trying to make an ending tonight,
end tonight x2

1st (Chorus)
It's not my strength to speak the reason,
I'm sorry I have to move along without you,
I promise I'll be back before the stars break ,
when it ends tonight...

I didn't mean to involve you in my past,
as I struggle to reach the surface...

As time moves on,
with you life seem to be beautiful,
even though I hide a painful scar...

Here I am ,
walking on broken glass, with endless bleeding,

Here I am,
Reflection of past keep flashing back, killing me inside,

(Bridge)
Here I am...Here I am...Here I am
trying to make an ending,
end tonight x2

2nd (Chorus)
It's not my strength to speak the reason,
I'm sorry I have to move along without you,
Promise me you will wait for me by the window pane,
when it ends tonight...

It's not my strength to speak the reason,
I'm sorry I have to move along without you,
I promise I'll be back before the stars break,
when it ends tonight...

I promise,
it ends tonight,

it ends tonight...
(another voice)-It's not my strength to speak the reason

it ends tonight...
(another voice)-I'm sorry I have to move along without you

I promise,
it ends tonight...

Contact: Sharvinvijay@yahoo.com

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It ends tonight/I promise - Lyric Feeback

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Sep 14, 2008
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The best one yet
by: Micheal

You should be proud of yourself.Well done...I will keep a track on you.

Sep 30, 2008
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Keep at it!
by: Ponani

In front of good melody this will be a good song.
Word order is thoughtful and liberal. Truely inspiring.

Oct 18, 2008
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Simply the best
by: Jason

Man, you rock. you got the chemistry...it's like you really had the situation. good job.

Nov 22, 2008
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Very Nice!!!
by: Jake

Not too many rhymes, and over all very well-written! Also, not too lengthy, which is always good. Check out my song, "Time" and tell me what you think!

Nov 26, 2008
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Wow!
by: Anonymous

From the second I started reading it I was amazed and completely emersed in the song. Your lyrics are amazing and can go with many types of melody. I can't wait to read some of your other songs. Take a look at my song "My best friend" and tell me what you think.

Feb 17, 2009
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Well done
by: Kerry-anne

one of the best i've read.
drew me in.
like a opening line from a good novel (:

Aug 04, 2009
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congrats
by: gaya3

keep up with ur good work...m not in music or lyrics but i think u deserve to praised...

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