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Internet Woman - Country/ Bluegrass (lyrics for critique)

by (T.J.) Thomas E. Johnson IV
(Columbia Missouri, U.S.A.)

Internet Woman
(Country/ Bluegrass)

Chorus:
My internet woman
She's the sexiest kind
She seduces me with pictures
That just blow my mind
I've got 37 e-mails
And I'm fallin' behind
From that beautiful internet woman of mine

1stv:
I met her on the website
love dot net
We're both so deep in love
And we ain't never even met
She whispers sweet nothin's
With the touch of a key
Yeah she's the only internet woman for me

Chorus:
My internet woman
She's the sexiest kind
She seduces me with pictures
That just blow my mind
I've got 37 e-mails
And I'm fallin' behind
From that beautiful internet woman of mine

2nd:
Someday we're gonna marry
On weddings dot com
And be joined in the eyes
Of the internet God
We'll walk through cyberspace
A' hand in hand
She's my internet woman, I'm her internet man

Repeat chorus x2:

Tag:
Yeah I've 37 e-mails
And I'm fallin' behind
From that beautiful internet woman of mine

Copyright 2008 Thomas E. Johnson IV








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Internet Woman - Country/ Bluegrass (lyrics for critique)

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Sep 19, 2008
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by: Anonymous

real good, i pick 5 others at random and the were all emotional song, u coulndt get a good vibe off them. but reading this one i could hear how it would sound and in my head it was amazing!

Sep 20, 2008
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Internet Woman
by: T.J.

Thank you for the great comment! I had alot of fun writing this one. This is one of my favorite that I've written and I get alot of laughs out of it when I play it. Thanks again!

Sep 23, 2008
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cute and catchy
by: Anonymous

Needs some work, but the concept is sound and the lyrics are catchy./

I think if you had a melody, and if this was recorded you might have a hit.

It does still need some work, but nothing that it beyond possible.

Oct 10, 2008
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by: Kazzaz

REALLY GOOD!!!

I like the whole idea of writing a song about internet dating. I think it your song would become a massive hit if you recorded it. :)

Nov 27, 2008
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Great Song!!!
by: Becky BC

Yep this is great, this is energetic, funny and timely. Probably a winner. Pls give feedback to my song when it's posted (my very first) because country music is my kinda music. Thanks.

Aug 16, 2009
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I love this
by: Lonnie

Nothing left to say but it's great. I love the ideal and it just flows along. Great writing

Jan 04, 2010
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Awsome!
by: Nic

best song on the site could've been a hit

Aug 31, 2010
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I like it
by: Josh Rhodes

I love the playfulness of the lyrics. Wish I could hear it to see how the melody would play along.

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