In Her Eyes Lyrics Critique- Alternative rock or Rock

by Shawn Dunn, Writter Wade Patry
(Sault Ste Marie Ontario Canada)

My friend wrote this song for our band. We don't have the music yet but that's a working progress. I'm the lead guitar and lead vocals and I was wondering what other people thought of the song so far:

Set them up and knock them down
That's the way this world goes round
People live and people die
Tell the truth and sometimes lie
People hope and people dream
Sometimes love and always scream

Always run and never walk
Never think before they talk
Live their lives to get through
Lookin for a chance to screw
Try to end before they start
What they do, where's the heart?

But in her eye's I seeeeeee
The way this world should be
When her eyes meet mine
Brings me back everytime
Peace and love-everywhere
In her loving heartfelt stare
All the world around me
In her eyes I see

It breaks my heart the way
The world always seems so grey
Sometimes all we've got
Is one chance, one shot
But baby with you
I wanna believe we can make it through

In her eye's I seeeeeee
The way this world should be
When her eyes meet mine
Brings me back everytime
Peace and love-everywhere
In her loving heartfelt stare
All the world around me
In her eyes I see

When the chips are down
I'm gonna be around
The man I wanna be
In her eyes I see

In her eye's I seeeeeee
The way this world should be
When her eyes meet mine
Brings me back everytime
Peace and love-everywhere
In her loving heartfelt stare
All the world around me
In her eyes I see