In Color - lyrics critique please! is accompanied by piano or guitar, so sort of a country song

by Mike

Verse 1

When I brushed by you,
you and your warmth with eyes like
the blazing sun above

Verse 2

Your face appears to be,
the purest rose in the bush
the prettiest one of all

Pre-Chorus

When i look into your eyes
I see the colors of a rainbow
Except there is no rain (rain held into chorus)

Chorus

When i see,(see) i see in color
When i think (think) i think only of you
When you laugh (laugh) i see us together
When you leave (leave) i see black and white (black and white)
So don?t leave, keep the rainbow going
and our lives will stay in color

Verse 3

as the sun outside fades
be my only light
keep the fire going,
try to hold on tight

Pre-Chorus

When i look into your eyes
I see the colors of a rainbow
Except there is no rain (rain held into chorus)

Chorus

When i see,(see) i see in color
When i think (think) i think only of you
When you laugh (laugh) i see us together
When you leave (leave) i see black and white (black and white)
So don?t leave, keep the rainbow (rainbow) going
and our lives will stay in color

Bridge

Be my rainbow
stay my rainbow
be my light
stay my light
be my rainbow (Rainbow held for 4 beats)

Be my rainbow
stay my rainbow
be my light
stay my light (light held for 4 beats)

Chorus

When i see,(see) i see in color
When i think (think) i think only of you
When you laugh (laugh) i see us together
When you leave (leave) i see black and white (black and white)
So don?t leave, keep the rainbow going
and our lives will stay in color