I'm Sorry Lyrics Critique

by Kaid Knoz
(pierre sd)

chorus

I'm sorry I'm sorry
for all the things that I've put you through
o please o please
please don leave i need you (love you) x2

verse 1

i can see it in your eyes
all the tears you wanna cry
and im sorry for what I've done
all the hell ive put you through
i don't know what to say
but i know just what ill do
im gunna change my life forever
im gunna show that I love you
(chorus)

verse 2

when did i turn into this monster
when did i get to be so bad
im gunna put down this bottle
im gunna be a better dad
(chorus)


This is all i have soo far... so i hope you like is