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Im So Sorry Lyrics Critique-Kate Carlon(Please dont steal)-Pop/Rock

by Kate Carlon
(Loomis, California, USA)

Verse 1:
I've Written them down a time or two,
But I just cant find the words to say to you,
I'm sorry things ended the way they did,
But don blame me anymore I cant take it.

Verse 2:
I know that I'm not perfect,
I'm sorry you never knew.
I know that I messed up,
But what else can I do?

Break: I'm sorry, I'm so sorry...

Chorus:
Please, Please, Forgive me,
I cant take this anymore,
Please, Please, Forgive me,
As you walk out the door.
I know that I was wrong(i was wrong..),
I have been all along,
I'm sorry, I'm so sorry...

Verse 3:
I didn't mean to hurt you,
I didn't mean to lie,
I didn't mean to anger you,
Didn't mean to make you cry.

Break: I'm Sorry, I'm so sorry...

(CHORUS)

Verse 4:
I'm sorry I don't love you,
Doesn't mean that I don't care,
I know that I messed up,
I know it wasn't fair.

Break: I'm sorry, I'm so sorry...

(CHORUS)

Verse 5:
I'm sorry I hurt you,
I'm sorry I lied,
I'm sorry I angered you,
Sorry I made you cry,

I'm sorry, I'm so sorry...

Verse 6:
I'm Sorry I'm not perfect,
I'm sorry you never knew,
I'm sorry it's over,
Im sorry, Im sorry...




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Im So Sorry Lyrics Critique-Kate Carlon(Please dont steal)-Pop/Rock

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Sep 30, 2009
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catchy
by: Geoff (Sydney)

Liked your lyrics but think you could join verses together as they are a lot shorter than the chorus. This particular arrangement would be very repetitive and boring. Try it and see what you think.

Oct 07, 2009
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hey i belive you
by: Anonymous

i just found it too apologetic more like what else can you offer besides an apology

Oct 12, 2009
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COMMENTS ON YOUR SONG
by: Scott

Kate, I thought it was good, heartfelt and at the end of the day, if you can put down what's inside then you can't really ask for more.

Dec 17, 2009
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nice work
by: andrew

really liked the line "just because i don't love you doesn't mean i dont care"

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