I'm Not Cinderella - acoustic - lyrics feedback

by Emma
(Sydney, Australia)

i wrote this song for my music assignment and would like to know what people think before i submit it :)

Once upon a time,
when nursery rhymes seemed so real.
I thought I was Cinderella, in her silver dress.

Tiny glass slippers, and pumpkin carriages
it all seemed so real in my dreams,
of what seemed reality.


Then suddenly,
the clocked struck twelve,
and it all disappears.

My prince is gone,
along with the carriage, and the glass slipper
only meant for me.

Chorus
I'm not Cinderella in her silver dress,
running down stairs to nowhere.
No slipper lying on the stairwell,
shining in the moonlight.
No, not tonight. I'm not Cinderella.

I'm to old for fairytales
and prince charming,
who isn't really there.

But I wanna prove it wrong,
I wanna find him some where.
If I have to look in never land.

All the way in some where,
I will find him. And show him that

chorus

the prince who's been,
dancing in my mind,
holding me tight,
telling me I'm beautiful
and everything he needs.

If it takes me the rest of my time,
I will find him. To prove
Cinderella is not the only one
with happy endings.

chorus
no, not her.