I’m Not Changing Me Lyrics Critique - Pop

by Carol Marissa L.
(Suriname)

Hey, I wrote this 2 years ago when I was all trying to find myself and stuff. These are my very first lyrics. Can I have your most honest opinion on this. Even if you hate it just say it. I wasn't really sure about the genre so I just wrote Pop. I'm not a native English speaker so I think there might be some grammatical errors or so.

Verse 1:
I’ve always been that kind of someone
Who feels so lost inside their self
Always wanted to be another person
Too afraid to be myself
I never thought that all of this would ever change
But now I see all the things that hid inside me
It feels like I gained
The ability to see all the things that I can be

Chorus:
I’m myself and I would never want to change me anymore
I would’ve in the past ,but now I’m going through a different door
There’s no way that I would kill to become
Someone that’s not even me
Because I’m all I want and need to be
There’s no way I’m changing me

Verse 2:
I always thought , I was bad at everything
Just good at being nothing
That’s why I never bothered to try
All I did was cry
I felt sorry for myself
For going through this hell
I would have done anything to get away from it all
I wanted to hide somewhere so far
Where the world can’t tell who you are
Now I’ve passed that time
and I can finally shine the light that’s mine

(Repeat chorus)

Bridge:
I don’t need to act like her
To feel good
Don’t want to do those things like him
Just to be cool
I don’t want to be a fool
Because I’ve seen what I can
And it made me who and what I am