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I'm Just Me - Country - Lyrics Critique

by Kristyn
(WV)

Let me know what you think. I'm open for opinions.

I’m Just Me

You’re the star of your hometown’s football team
And I’m, I’m just me
She’s on every single team that she can be
And I’m, I’m just me
Oh how can I compete
Cause I’m just me

She’s dated every single boy in this school
Except you
I guess she can have you I she really, really wants to
I don’t know what to do
I’m feeling really insecure
I honestly don’t know anymore

She looks like a supermodel
I look like an average girl
You are like a bottle rocket
Oh, you rock my world,‘cause

You’re the star of your hometown’s football team
And I’m, I’m just me
She’s on every single team that she can be
And I’m, I’m just me
Oh how can I compete
Cause I’m just me

Every girl in this school wants you
Even her
Tell me why she’s so important to your world
I know I’m just a wide-eyed girl

She lies, she cheats
I don’t do any of those things
I guess you don’t care
About my invisibility

You’re the star of your hometown’s football team
And I’m, I’m just me
She’s on every single team that she can be
And I’m, I’m just me
Oh how can I compete
Cause I’m just me

I guess the sooner I see, the better
Don’t think my eyes could get any wetter
From the tears
That are pouring down my face

You’re the star of your hometown’s football team
And I’m, I’m just me
She’s on every single team that she can be
And I’m, I’m just me
Oh how can I compete
Oh, oh

You’re the star of your hometown’s football team
And I’m, I’m just me
She’s on every single team that she can be
And I’m, I’m just me
Oh how can I compete
Cause I’m just me

Oh I’m just me
I’m just me
Oh I’m just me

Oh I’m just me
I’m just me
Oh I’m just me

I know that your life may seem
Like girls are everything
But for once
Please
Just notice me




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I'm Just Me - Country - Lyrics Critique

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Oct 25, 2010
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Not good,not bad
by: Giovana

Here's what it is..an average song..I mean..anyone can write a song like that..what about the love?the passion?the action..the drama..I can't see it!!sorry But I'm a realistic..as I said..It's not bad..but also..not AWESOME!

Oct 25, 2010
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thnx
by: Kristyn

I just wanted to thank you for your comment. It was not my best, but I do have worse. I think it's good to have some critisism in songwriting. I know it's not perfect but it was one of the first songs I wrote. Thank you for telling me like it is, not lying to me... thnx :)

Feb 19, 2011
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LOVE
by: LAUREN THOMPSON!!!

well look....i love you but even if i didnt know you and you showed me this song i could tell you...you will be famous one day...and i mean it girl you have a talent and you need to tell the worlD!!

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