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I'll marry the bridesmaid anyways lyrics critique - alil bit of punk rock i guess, you know soundtracks for summer teen movies

Hey it's Charlie, guess what, I'm writing this on the spot, so no real melodies yet.

Not the queen of status among her friends
Not the one to start the latest trends
Everyone would preferred her sister
Even her birthday they won't remember

Chorus:
Cause she's rock bottom of the so called food chain
Cause she's not into gossip girls and 'plastic' pain
Her mother told her always the bridesmaid never the bride
So I told her it's alright
Despite all the world would say
I'll marry the bridesmaid anyway

I can't believe how people missed her hazel eyes
Guess how she is makes them hate to realize
Go honey go wear those jeans to prom night
I wouldn't have you any other way alright?

Chorus:
Cause she's rock bottom of the so called food chain
Cause she's not into gossip girls and 'plastic' pain
Her mother told her always the bridesmaid never the bride
So I told her it's alright
Despite all the world would say
I'll marry the bridesmaid anyway

I'll re-tape our soon to be
Accidentally erased wedding tape
You didn't mean to I could see
Some where some how we will escappppppeeee




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I'll marry the bridesmaid anyways lyrics critique - alil bit of punk rock i guess, you know soundtracks for summer teen movies

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Jun 16, 2010
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GREAT
by: Anonymous

I really really really!!! like this...it made me smile to see how you put it all together. Love it the girl that wasn't like the Beyonce or Jessica Simpson but more like Solange or Ashley Simpson but that's okay cause you love her for who she is bump the "bride" you feelin the bridesmaid lol I know you understand your own song just something I do. Love it!!! =)

Jun 18, 2010
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cute!
by: Becky

This is quite adorable. It looks like it has great potential, I just couldn't quite get the jist of the music, which is probably just me. I'd really love to hear it live though. Write on!

Nov 09, 2010
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Great writing chops
by: Anonymous

Well, I never write on the comments lists, I trsut it is for losers. But here I am. Your sassy, accute portrayal has led me to be the exception to my rule. Just nailed it! Effective, short ans sweet.

Kudos!!!

Please keep on posting your lyrics.

Jan 25, 2011
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:D
by: Kelsey(:

AHHH. This was adorable. I loveeeee it.

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