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"If Only You Knew Lyrics Critique-country song"

by Ana

You look and wave and I try to act cool
but really you made my day at school

I see you everywhere by never really gotten to know you

And I wonder all the time what you think of me
Passin in the hall makes my heart take wings

Chorus:
If only you knew how much I love you
If only you knew the times I think about you
It's killin me to think it won't work out baby
But what do I do now?
If only you knew

It's time for prom and I know the end. You'll ask the hot girl but again I'll mend

You see I've learned from the past, and it's killin me to think I'd be picked last...

If it wasn't for you, I don't know where I'd be. Probably liking someone else feelin sorry for me..(chorus)

Bridge:
The world stops just for a while when you flash me a smile...(chorus)

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