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If I only had you-pop song - lyrics critique

by Ashley
(Elkin,NC,North America)

I lived all my life with my head in the clouds
and I had no idea if I'd ever be coming down
and then I met you,totally out of the blue
I knew you'd be the one to make my dreams come true.

(chorus)
If I only had you,I'd climb higher than before
I'd throw all the hurder right out my front door
Then my whole life would be a paradise
the whole world would then seem nice
if I only had you,it would be perfect.


I would spread my wings and fly abroad
all the while,my voice would be singing
of how you made my whole life complete
with you,there's no challenge I couldn't meet.

(repeat chorus)


I'd be happy to sail the world
just to be your precious pearl
the only one you'll ever need
yes baby,that's me,indeed!

(repeat chorus to fade




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If I only had you-pop song - lyrics critique

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May 11, 2009
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i luv it
by: Anonymous

i luv the song. keep it up. this is a little short but i think that if u lengthened it it would be pretty bad ass. keep writing

May 26, 2009
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Well. . .
by: Anonymous

The song is good, and has a ryme, I think the ryme takes away the personal charateristics from the song, other than that I enjoyed it. With a little work, this song would be awesome!

Jul 05, 2010
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Hey!
by: Allie(:

Wow, these were pretty good!
Would you mind if I used them, modified them a little and then used them for myself? I mean, it's just a lite shirt and maybe a littleess cliche ryhming but you're pretty good! Please do tell me if you have more!
Allie(:

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