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If I had a car like that country Lyric Critique

by Charlie
(Alabama)

If I had a car like that

She was low and mean
I wasn’t quiet sixteen
And she was the object of my dreams
She had a Drop top, big block, with four in the floor
A high school boy couldn’t ask for more
She was Alabama Red
She had black leather seats
When she fired off, it sounded so sweet

Oh, If I had a car like that
Wouldn’t I be cool?
Can’t you see all the girls going crazy?
When I’d drive that car to school
Yeah, I’d be King of the hill, in nothing flat
If I had a car like that

As I got older
My life started to change
My hopes and my dreams got re-arranged
My red corvette, turned into a mini van
I needed room for five and child restraints
I still wanted that vet
But my wife said that I can’t
Then I drove past that Chevy dealer I started to think,

Oh, If I had a car like that
Wouldn’t I be cool?
Can’t you see all the kids going crazy?
When I’d drive that car to school.
Yeah, I’d be King of the hill in nothing flat
If I had a car like that

So now I got
DVDs on the back of each seat
At least three cup holders with in every ones reach
I got storage in the floor
I got storage on the roof
I have become my father
And I’m driving the proof
Then I see a Corvette going down the street, once again I can't help but think

Oh, If I had a car like that
Wouldn’t I be cool?
Can’t you see all the other dads going crazy?
When I’d drive that car to school.
Yeah, I’d be King of the hill in nothing flat
If I had a car like that
Yeah, If I only had a car like that.








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If I had a car like that country Lyric Critique

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Mar 18, 2009
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Cool Idea for a lyric
by: Anonymous

Good Job Charlie

Jul 20, 2009
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Brilliant!
by: Anonymous

Have you got a melody to go with it? it sems like it could be a really catchy song with tthe right meldoy. The lyrics are sweet, sounds exactly like something you would hear whilst driving around! could you please maybe have a read of my submission, if its not too much hassle?

http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/country-boy-lyric-feedback.html

its country as well :)

keep up the writing!

Aug 22, 2009
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I like it
by: Lonnie

Great job, keep it up

Oct 24, 2009
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Nice!
by: doug

Holy crap can I relate to that. Good job.

Oct 26, 2009
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good
by: Bryan

It's a great song!! but also reminds me a little of another country song ive heard...but would definetly listen to this too though, might want to make it a lil longer though.

Aug 31, 2010
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Love the chorus
by: Joshua Rhodes

I love the chorus!!! Seems like the verses need some work to really fit what I'm hearing in my head at least. I love the chorus tho! Its one of those choruses I wish I had written!

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