"I'd Never do that to you" Lyrics Critique - Alternative Rock Song

by Justin
(Montana)

This is the first song I've ever written....(so I don't mind if you don't like it). It's about a relationship where the girl messes up and the boyfriend is nice enough not to blame her. This is only part of it so you could get an idea. I know some of the rhyming is not technically correct and spaced out... but i think it works ok.

(Verse)
I woke up this morning
and rubbed my sleepy eyes
I shrank from that cold wood floor again
'cause all that i could surmise
all the memories of yesterday
would carry me
away with my emotions, body, and my sanity
we broke up on friendly terms
but i still feel like i'm falling
through the hole you left in me
when you shot me with your words

(PreChorus)
There were times
I would have liked to know
There were times
when you said you had to go
I never thought that this whole thing
would crash down in flames
and this whole time I'd like to know
Who are we to blame?

(Chorus)
It's not you're fault
we both know that for sure
and you might think
now that we're over i'll blame you
but that's not the honest thing to do
and so with that, I'll say only one thing
I'd never do that to you