I would fight the gods for you (country-blues) - lyrics critique

by James
(N. Ireland)

My first song. Hope u guys like it

my life has no meaning
Im a provider thats it
i have nothing to strive for
i am cursed i am broken

but you i have you
you are the jewels in my crown of thorns
and each time i loose you
i get ready to mourn

(chorus)
cus i would fight the gods for u
go to the ends of this earth for u
or there is nothing i wouldnt do
i would die with you (chorus ends)

the gods would strike with a venegence
theyd surely turn me to dust
thats nothing to what id do to them
for u id kill them all if i must

you are all i have
the only thing to my name
youve a heart like a wild beast
that never should be tamed

chorus

religion is our culture
its our flesh blood and bones
full of mythical creatures
and spirits which wail and moan

it strikes terror in the heart
of the biggest tallest man
id shield you from their lightening
protect you for as long as i can

chorus

i would lay my worthless soul on the line for you

~fin~
Its not my love for my girlfriend before anyone asks its about a mothers love for her child and the idea sprouted from the book things fall apart by chinua achebe.