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I wish things were simple again - lyrics critique

by Bobby Reynolds
(safford Az)

By: Bobby Reynolds 1792 47th street safford az 928-651-1971
This song is my song please don’t copy it with out my permission
E-mail meyapig@live.com

I wish things were simple again


Sitting here thinking about simpler time when people would stop by just to say hi

now all you can expect is mostly goodbye as the people move away to find a new job cuz that dam mine just had a big lay off
I wish things were simple again the way they were when I was a kid before cars and houses and designer cloths when all that matter was if you got a new gi Joe
I wish things were simple again
time when you supported people even if they weren’t your kin
I wish things were simple again now all we have is good bye to what seemed to be the dream of life
here comes the repo man trying to get my car again but I’ll hide for another day and try to keep the wolfs at bay
I wish things were simple again lord will you help us or are we on our own to bear this life we though was golden
how stupid we are for planning on hope that some corporate man would keep us afloat I wish things were simple again
like when I was a little kid as time get hard and Americans lose hope all there dreams are lost just looking for what life really cost it’s on our tv radio and the papers again another lay off of hard working men .. man I really wish thing’s were simple again so tonite when I look into my daughter’s eye’s she say daddy I love you and then it’s like thing’s are simple again




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Jul 22, 2009
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great song
by: Anonymous

this ia a really good song it just say's what thousands of people are thinking every day I hope you much Success and that maybe it will get to the right person and become a great song for all Americans to enjoy good luck

Jul 28, 2009
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This is not ur every day song so it makes it that much better and sticks out more! it's really great. next time can u just label the verses and chores please, to break it down.

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