I Will Lighten Your Life - Justin Cayce - Balladine Blues - Songwriting Critique

by Justin Cayce
(Bangkok Thailand)

I'd like to know exactly what kind of mood this evokes (if any)...

I Will Lighten Your Life - Justin Cayce

Oh Lord I?ve been lost
For such a long, long time now
So down in the dark
Tell me, what was my crime now
Well now, it?s left its mark
I?ve paid time after time now
And I?d give my last dime
To make everything fine now

So lady, let me lighten your life
Let me lighten, let me lighten your life
Let me lighten, lighten your life
Lady, let me lighten your life

Oh lady, let me lighten your life
Let me lighten, let me lighten your life
Let me lighten, lighten your life
Lady, let me lighten your life

And you make it okay
To live life day by day, now
Know just what I must to pay
To trick you to stay, now
And though I may not say
In words and in ways how
You brighten my days
With your own rainbow rays now

So lady, let me lighten your life
Let me lighten, let me lighten your life
Let me lighten, lighten your life
Lady, let me lighten your life

Oh lady, let me lighten your life
Let me lighten, let me lighten your life
Let me lighten, lighten your life
Lady, let me lighten your life

So don?t say a sound
And I?ll turn your life round now
I won?t see you down
And I?ll fade your frown now
Because I am bound
To being your clown now
And I?ll be around
I know just what I?ve found
I?m around just to lighten your life

So lady, let me lighten your life
Let me lighten, let me lighten your life
Let me lighten, lighten your life
Lady, let me lighten your life

Oh lady, let me lighten your life
Let me lighten, let me lighten your life
Let me lighten, lighten your life
Lady, let me lighten your life

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(c) Justin Cayce 2009