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I want to Be Someone Else Lyrics Critique- Medium tempo song with feeling

by L
(SC, USA)

I want to Be Someone Else

I cry Every night
Just thinking about my life
I wake up every morning
Wanting to be different

Everybody else is soo happy
they believe in themselves
believe in a happy ending.....

(Chorus)
I'm scared of what will become
Will my dreams come true?
What will happen if I don't change?
Will I be by myself?
I want to be different
I want to change the way I am
I want a better life
I want to be someone else

I am sad all the time
I cry just thinking about how I hate where I live
hate what I live in
I wanna be somewhere else

I want everyone else's life
I want to scream I HATE MY LIFE!
'Cause i just can't take it anymore
My life is such a bore

(Chorus)

I wanna be a movie star
so i can be different
so I can be pretty
capture all my dreams

I wanna fly to Paris on my jet
I want to go where I want to go
I want to be who I want be

(slower and softer)
I'm scared of what will become
Will my dreams come true?
What will happen if i don't change?
I want a better life....
I want to be someone else..





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I want to Be Someone Else Lyrics Critique- Medium tempo song with feeling

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Feb 19, 2009
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Acoostic Zoo - Recording Studios Brisbane www.acoosticzoo.com
by: Anonymous

Well Done, Great JOB. Keep writing.

Feb 22, 2009
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Nice work
by: Bri

Great job! Keep it up!!

Mar 19, 2009
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Great song!
by: Elizabeth -_- :)

That's awesome! I hate my life but I don't want to be someone else. I just want for me to be a little more noticed. If you want to, you can check out my song "Fingerprints" on this site; the of it is pretty simalar to this song. Keep writing, you're great!

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