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I Love You, This is How I feel - Lyrics Critique - Unknown Genre

by Kimberly D.
(Weaverville, CA)

I really want to know what you guys think...Please dont be afrid to be Harsh. I really want to make this song perfect since its about my life.

I Love You, This is How I feel

Stopped Lying to Myself
I love him
But theres no help for me now
Im sitting in this empty house
Waiting for him to come home now
Why cant I just be with the person that I love
2 Futures 2 destineys
Why cant they be the same
8 Years is just to long now
This is how it goes

Chorus:
Writing letters to our loved ones
Never goes well
Im good how are you is always how it goes
Im willing to wait
But are you willing to let me stay
I love you, this is how I feel
Love isnt just a fairytale now

You came home and now you know
how i truly feel
this and that we go back and forth
How do we figure all this out
i love you, you love me
but neither wanna get hurt
we have to take a chance or
well never be the same
always wondering how its going to be
this is how it goes

Chorus:
Writing letters to our loved ones
Never goes well
Im good how are you is always how it goes
Im willing to wait
But are you willing to let me stay
I love you, this is how I feel
Love isnt just a fairytale now

we are hand in hand
its a summers day
loving eachother
we took a chance and now were owning it
hanging out with all our friends
rolling around in the sand
all of a sudden
i see you get down on one knee
and pull out this beautiful diamond ring
you ask will you marry me
i say forever and always
and this is how it goes

writing letters to our loved ones
always goes well
im good, how are you
is always how it goes
i was willing to wait and you took the chance
i love you, this is how we feel
love isnt just a fairy tale now
(Last Verse 2x)

I Love You




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I Love You, This is How I feel - Lyrics Critique - Unknown Genre

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by: Kristyn

I liked it. I can relate.

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