I just want to know lyrics critique-country song

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I just want to know lyrics critique-country song

by Stephanie Martin
(Livonia,Michigan,USA)

Me-Stephanie

I've done some thinking
I just want to know if
you love me like you did
when we were just kids

How about that time when, uh
we kissed for the first time.
under the moon light
walking in the rain

Chorus
I need some answers darlin'
i need them now baby
like i said I've done some thinking
and I just want to know if
you still love me.

I'm laying here next to you baby
holding you tight
there is one explanation darlin'
and its buggin' me tonight.

Chorus 2x

by: stephanie martin
16 years old

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I just want to know lyrics critique-country song

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Jul 28, 2009
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lol
by: Anonymous

this is cool , i like it.

Jul 28, 2009
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by: Writer

it's pretty good, i like the direction it's taking but i bet u can make it even better. Maybe add some more descriptive sentences 2 make the song longer & add more feeling 2 it.

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