I Forgot to Say I Love You - Pop Ballad - Lyrics Critique

by Mark
(Michigan)

Wait, Just give me one more chance
This might be a surprise, so hold on with both hands
Your eyes shine bright, more than all the stars in the sky
and a page turns in my life, when I see you smile

Wait let me say one thing more, there's something I have to do
I hope it's not too late, and I know I could say so much more
Wait, I forgot to say I love you

Well I hope he's nice, I hope he treats you right
and I hope he makes you laugh and likes all the things that you like
and I hope he loves you, and that you feel the same way too
and I will dry my tears, say goodbye my dear, and live my worst fears

Please let me try one time more, I know now what I must do
I'm sorry I'm too late,and yes we could've been so much more
Yes, I forgot to say

In my dreams your heart is where I belong
and there you'll say, you've loved me all along

Wait let me say one thing more, I know now what I must do
I know that I'm too late, but I can't hold it in anymore
Yes, yes, I love you

Wait, before we say goodbye, I hope that you know my love is always nearby
your eyes shine bright, more than all the stars in the sky
and I know I could say so much more.