I Cried All Night - Lyrics Ballad - Critique

by John Knight
(Cambridge, England)

Author: John Knight
©2011 John Knight
Title: I Cried all Night

(Chorus 1)
I cried all night
When you said goodbye
Let me dry my eyes now
Let me live this lie

I cried the next day
Many tears of woe
I don't understand Dear
Why you had to go

My heart's in two
Now you've gone away
Take this half with you
The other part can stay

(Chorus 1)
I cried all night
When you said goodbye
Let me dry my eyes now
Let me live this lie

I'm all alone
In my empty shame
I see your face Dear
And I call your name

Will you come back?
And fulfill my life
Not just as my sweetheart
But as my loving wife

(Chorus 2)
I cried all night
Tears of joy you see
I hear your footsteps
You've come back to me