I can't see -Lyrics critique - indie song

by keira
(Scotland)

love, it's just strange
It's just sitting there, just out of my range
But i can see it so clearly now
What i wanna understand is how

The pain sours through me everyday
What i don't understand is what i'm supposed to say
What i can't see is whats infront of me
The darkness taking over the light, It's just what's supposed to keep up the night.

Pain, It's just wrong
Like the lyrics of a broken song
I wanna see what is wrong with me
Is it the broken branches in this crying tree

The pain sours through me everyday
What i don't understand is what i'm supposed to say
What i can't see is what's in front of me
The darkness taking over the light, it's just what's supposed to keep up the night.

I just keep running, on and on
I can just run to you and tell you it's wrong

The pain sours through me everyday
What i don't understand is what i'm supposed to say
What i can't see is right in front of me
The darkness taking over the light, it's just what's Supposed to keep up the night.