I Can Admit Lyrics Critique- Rap Lyrics

by Shelby
(Rochester, NY)

When I'm angry,
I tend to write.
When I'm angry,
I tend to fight,
cuz those are the only things I can do right.
Right and wrong,
to me there's no difference.
Fuck it,
they're just opposites.
You can get your tiny violin out and let it play,
but while you do that just let me say,
cherish the wrong moments that make every fuckin' day.
I remember that day I fucked up
and i almost got my ass cuffed up,
but i just sit back now and get fucked up
and reminice in a bliss of piff.
Reminice about every minute you have missed
all the minutes like this:
all the minutes you coulda' called back
all the minutes you coulda' stepped back
are all gone now and aint' comin' back.
There's no turnin back,
so no point in lookin back.
But i know your eyes baby,
they're not new
and i know you wanna look back too.
Please dont cry,
I know im fucked up
but its not your fault.
Just please dont give up
on me
is everythig in my life.
I wish i could just turn those parts black
and paint them night.
I'm so sorry i dont give a fuck
and I'm so sorry that i fucked it all up
but everything you taught me I will always use,
majority of what i have learned
i have learned from you.
So please dont feel useless
cuz without you i would be confused.
I lost everything i had
and now cuz of my ways,
I'm probably fuckin' gonna loose you too.
If someone reads this they wont know who its bout,
but thats okay cuz u know who your about
ha
if you wanna succeed then you gotta live it up
and when it comes to me it aint' push comes to shove,
its shove comes to push so im never able to give up.
So be that push that i need to go on
and be that light that i need on,
and guide me to the guy that radiates the sun,
and bless me with emotion not a motion.
Everything in my life is glow in the dark,
and when your whole life is dark,
seein gets hard.
and when seein gets hard,
believin gets hard.
have alotta fun findin trust in my yard.
I'm sorry if i am givin the wrong vibe,
fuck
i really am grateful to be alive,
but only these tears i can describe,
so shut the fuck up and stop tellin me what i gotta hide.