How Could You Do This (To Me)? - Indie Rock - Songwriting Critique

by K. Fretz
(London)

You said we would last forever,
You said we would never end,
You said you thought I was clever,
Kind, sweet, cute,
And you liked my eyes!
Now Look!
At my eyes swimming with sorrow
Now Look!
At my eyes filled with pain
Now Look!
At my hand, reaching out, for your hand...
One last time again!

Chorus: How Could You Do This?
How Could You Do This To Me?
How Could You Do This?
Might as well hang me from a tree,
How Could You Do This?
Lock me in a cell and lose the key,
How Could You Do This?
How Could You Do This To Me?


Once you even said that you loved me,
Now you only say that to him,
You used to say I had a special place in you heart...
But now you’ve given it to him!
But I won’t!
Just won’t, feel spiteful,
And I won’t!
Just won’t, fell hate,
And I won’t!
Just won’t, be angry... when you call and say can we just be friends?

Chorus x 2

Now Look!
At my eyes swimming with sorrow
Now Look!
At my eyes filled with pain
Now Look!
At my hand, reaching out, for your hand...
One last time again!
But I won’t!
Just won’t, feel spiteful,
And I won’t!
Just won’t, fell hate,
And I won’t!
Just won’t, be angry... when you call and say can we just be friends?

Chorus (Quietly)