hometown - rap - lyrics critique

by Dec Tomlinson
(luton, bedfordshire)

i cant stress enough,
the pain that you see,
the thoughts i wanna relieve,
but they cry for more,
my head is sore,
im loosing my grip,
wheres reality,
this a nightmare,
a good nights rare,
back to old blocks,
poppin' off glocks,
tick tock,
seconds turn to hours,
hours turn to days,
days to years,
years to fears,
fear the next year,
will it change,
i doubt it,
just the daily grind,
thats what happens,
drop a tear,
but face it harsh,
slow down and think,
what do you need,
what is it you seek,
hide and peek,
play it that way,
keep hidden and work hard,
just glow when its dark,

cant fly away now,
this is england,
its coming down,
hear the sound,
here from day cause,
this is my hometown x2

flashing lights,
and they aint bright,
but they light us up,
thats our dream,
to get somewhere,
but dont wanna leave,
are we scared?,
truth or dare,
want the truth,
where are we heading,
not just me,
but all of us,
its not looking good,
turning our back,
on chances,
wishes are forgotten,
far from dreams,
more like ideas,
no one will listen,
theyre taking the piss an,
im trying my best,
i cant test,
were far from bless,
have a guess,
one go,
one long show,
thats what life is,
death will send us a kiss,
some will want it,
others wont

cant fly away now,
this is england,
its coming down,
hear the sound,
here from day cause,
this is my hometown x2