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High School Crush - pop song - lyrics critique

by Ashley
(Elkin,NC,North America)

I've known him as long as I can remember
he's always been the only one I see
loving him has made me start to wonder
if I will ever find another guy like him
maybe even one who will actually like me.

When I'm around him my stomach hurts
it's just hard to be near him
he's the only one I've ever loved
something about him is pure magic
as much as I want it,I can't have it.

(chorus)
Have you ever felt your heart in your stomach
park outside his house,see him watching,and gun it
driving down the street,hoping no one will see
wondering what he does to do this to me
I've never been the girl to act like this
but seeing his eyes brings me schoolyard bliss
story of a funny little thing called high school crush.


I saw him across the hallway,yesterday
less than a hundred feet,but felt like a thousand away
my palms got sweaty,my heart felt faint
I don't think I can last like this another day
what I wouldn't give to have him look my way!

(chorus)


We graduated high school five years ago
haven't seen half my class since then
walk into the grocery store,wouldn't you know
I see someone amazing enough to make my head spin
after all this time,the song in my head goes like this

(chorus)

Today I felt my heart in my stomach
I wanted to get in my car and gun it
He asks me how I'm doing,and for the first time
I feel fine.




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High School Crush - pop song - lyrics critique

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Feb 01, 2010
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by: Kelsey.

Very Cute. (: Nice job.

Feb 03, 2010
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by: kayla

awesome! it was really good love the story

Feb 16, 2010
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by: Writer

i really like this song. i'd love to be able 2 hear the melody it goes to tho..The story is very good and so true for many ppl. let's hope if someone like's someone they don't have 2 wait over 5 years to talk to them. lol. best of luck if this applies to anyone reading Ashley's song
It's very Taylor Swift to me...and i give that as a compliment!

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