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"Heroes and Dreams Lyrics Critique - Country Song"

by D. Speener
(E. Peoria, IL)

When we were younger
We'd share with each other
Our innermost secrets and dreams.

You'd be the damsel
Of a medieval castle
In a fairy tail world of dragons and kings.

You'd promise your heart
To the knight who could save you,
And the hero would always be me.

Then we'd ride off together
In search of forever,
Drifting through your fantasy.

You grew up believing
That dreams were deceiving,
And happiness couldn't be found

In an old box of memories
That once held you near me;
You gave up your need to have heroes around.

But the moments we treasured
As Children together
Will always be with you, my friend.

And through the whispering echoes
Of dragons and heroes,
We'll ride off together again.

And through the whispering echoes
Of dragons and heroes,
We'll ride off together again.




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"Heroes and Dreams Lyrics Critique - Country Song"

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Feb 25, 2009
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Very Nice!
by: Charlie

I like the images you use your rythm and ryme is excellent.The emotional value of your lyrics is very strong. Keep it up!!

Aug 22, 2009
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It need another verse
by: Lonnie

It's really good, I just think it needs another verse in it

Aug 23, 2009
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Explanation of Song
by: D. Speener

With many songs being based on personal experiences, Heroes and Dreams is no exception.

The girl that the song is about is one I had a high school class with - but I only knew her for half the school year, as I went into the military and had to say goodbye. I never got a chance to let her know how I feel.

The song is largely metaphoric, although based on actual experiences.

As to the comments about the song not being long enough, I agree. I'd like to see it longer. But with such a limited time involved, to make up something that didn't happen just to add a verse would be dishonest and unfair to its integrity.


Nov 08, 2010
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Tragic Update
by: D. Speener

I am saddened to report that the greatest thing that ever happened in my life passed away on May 13, 2010.

It's so tragic that I never found her, and so she never heard the song.

Nov 21, 2010
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very good
by: Anonymous

i love it

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