"Heres My Stance" Lyrics, Critique, Rap

by Zach
(Missouri)

The tempo is average speed, and I do bend some words, and use pauses to rhyme. I ask you dont judge, me but judge the lyrical ability. I really want to know if I have talent, or just corny. Please be honest if this is mediocre or above average. It may seem hateful but It is my way of releasing anger. It is like a diary entry but my mind thinks in rhymes at night. I appreciate your time.


I may act like Im an addict
Spew raps that seem sarcastic
Never claimed id spit some dope shit
Just share feelings, some raw emotion
Ive packaged and bottled bullshit
For too long, Now Ima explode- Bitch
Be fair,Cause im tryin to rap this
I dont care if my rhymes are whack shit
Tryin to find my mind, cause i done lost it
From all the lies, and the brainwashing
Dawn, read my rhymes,
Your son hates you.
Im gone, not tryin
To play games, you
Gave me a choice,
And I have chosen
You said to go home?
And be with family?
This is home, finally free
Family, you dont know what it means
Let me show you, it includes
Me, Malinda, and Ma-Ken-Zie
Not you, you had your chance Dawn
Your cruel, stop baggin on my baby's mom
Thats the way to win me back?
Fuck you, shes true,
Stuck through, saw potential,
In your son Zach.

Heres my stance,
Dont call, dont send a text, till you admit,
Your wrong,dont make sense, jus full of shit
Last straw, Im callin shots,Do you want in?
Stand tall, Fix your flaws, No selfish bitch
Last of all, my babys mom, Betta fix the shit
Realize, pain you cause, Then, start wishin
Apologize, more than once, But still Not forgiven.




To you I may seem sporadic
I use this to my adavantage
My mind, it just ticks faster
Than yours, And thats just that.
My mom, shes too inadequate
So Drop her like a bad habit,
Father, shit, wheres my dad?
Oh, yeah, faggot chose crack
Blame my parents,not like that
Hate their parenting?
You bet your asses.
But I learned some goddamn lessons
And wont take shit for granted.

Insults, Mom Ive had it
Drugs? Nope Im just manic
But i will learn to manage
So im not so godamn frantic
Use all kinds of helpful tactics
You got no time for stress or panic
My mind cant have bull-shit added
Moms voice, bitch,I cant stand it
Ask how i feel, well ill rap it
Go pop a pill, hell ur an addict
Want my love, just cant have it
Lost a son, Not comin back bitch

Heres my stance,
Dont call, dont send a text, till you admit,
Your wrong,dont make sense, jus full of shit
Last straw, Im callin shots,Do you want in?
Stand tall, Fix your flaws, No selfish bitch
Last of all, my babys mom, Betta fix the shit
Realize, pain you cause, Then, start wishin
Apologize, more than once, But still Not forgiven.


I'm about to kill her,
I can feel it building up,
You aint a parent,
told you just a washed up cunt
Jeff, need a pill sir?
Go lift your mattress up
Fuckin steal it,
u know u gotta have it punk
You got a problem,
dont try to put on a front
I see right through you,
a thief, liar, and a drunk!
Shit I was one too,
Didnt think id call you out?
And If I see ya Step dad,
just please back off
"Dawn, Zach took it",
Im just a lil addict huh?
Dumb son of a bitch
Ya, you better fuckin run, sick of
My family always bein shit on.
Just shut up a minute
Damn that Atterall
What Dr gives you this many drugs?
Different prescription
Everytime I fuckin turn around
Helpin her? Shes sick?
Maybe, but now her mind is numb
Dr.Faggot, need to lose your license doc,
Ill make a call, ah screw it, everyone can jus
Fuck off..


Heres my stance,
Dont call, dont send a text, till you admit,
Your wrong,dont make sense, jus full of shit
Last straw, Im callin shots,Do you want in?
Stand tall, Fix your flaws, No selfish bitch
Last of all, my babys mom, Betta fix the shit
Realize, pain you cause, Then, start wishin
Apologize, more than once, But still Not forgiven.