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Here we go again - lyrics critique

by Kelly
(California)

It is about a crush moving away & you care so much after they hurt you so badly.

Verse 1:
Can We please make this fast
So I can go home, think it all over, and try to make us last.
You'll be gone, but I'm still holding on to every word.
Thinking back, wondering why I never got a chance.
I was here all along, and you were, too. But your heart was always somewhere far.

Chorus:
Here we go again, another quick, bitter ending. It's time to stop pretending I don't see you there.
And after everything, how much time will you spare me to say goodbye? We both know I'll break down if I look Into your eyes. After all that you put me through, why am I spending so much time saying goodbye to you?

Verse 2:
This is it, these are the last words you'll remember me by. And I know you're hoping this will be another confession, but if I said those things, you'd never say them back to me. But I guess it's my fault for believing you felt something too. When I was the only one, the one who really loved you.

Repeat chorus

Verse 3:
Day in, day out, I kept believing you would cone around.
But this is our last day, and you've still proven nothing to me.
I can't make you stay, I can't make you love me.
She's so much better, but when you leave you'll just forget her.
But please Tate, please don't forget me & all the times we've had.
No matter how hard i try, you'll never see the silent tears i cry. Think about everything I never said, cuz one day you'll see everything I really meant.

Repeat chorus.

THE END.

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