her romeo (pop/country) -lyrics critique

by jessica
(new york)

thsi is a recent song but please keep in mind that i am only thirteen so you can critizise but don't be to harsh....

Its an age old story
filled with love and glory
starts witha boy and girl
a kiss
and intertwining worlds

for some its easy
finding their love story
not for her
not for her

looking for love shouldn't be this tough
not like she sees it in the movies each scene going smoothly
some just have it made
brought together by fate
she'll just sit and wait
"what light the yonder window breaks" in this little town waiting for her romeo to come around

shes wearing her best dress
pacing up and down the staircase
mirrors looking at her
as shes waits for her prince charming
to come on trhough
bring his white horese too
this should be easy not for her not for her

looking for love shouldn't be this tough
not like she sees it in the movies each scene going smoothly
some just have it made
brought together by fate
she'll just sit and wait
"what light the yonder window breaks" in this little town waiting for her romeo to come around

oh oh
one breath at a time
oh oh
he'll come around on eof these nights
oh oh oh oh be patient baby
this should be easy
but not for her
not for her

looking for love shouldn't be this tough
not like she sees it in the movies each scene going smoothly
some just have it made
brought together by fate
she'll just sit and wait
"what light the yonder window breaks" in this little town waiting for her romeo to come around

one of these days
ina special place
he'll get down on one knee
asking "baby will you marry me"
diamond ring in his hand
juliet wishes she could have this man
romeo, her romeo has come arounnd