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Her Fake Love Lyrics Critique - metal song

by Ben
(New York)

This song talk about a man his wife was hate and betray him and pretending that she loves him.

people I need your opinion about this lyrics ,please right a comments.


I have plunge deep in your heart and I have saw the truth
Your black lies will never blind me from the truth
Your scent of hate will never fade in my nose
Your love mask will never cover your real face

Chorus:

You were a devil ruin my life
You better keep ran away before I hit you by the arrows of revenge


You have torn me with your blood stained hand
And tear out my heart
But someday I will find you and put the suffering you have caused to me in your heart

Chorus:

You were a devil ruin my life
You better keep ran away before I hit you by the arrows of revenge


I have to break through this life
That you have turned it to hell
I promise I will not be broken again
,Won’t fall in the same trap

Chorus:

You were a devil ruin my life
You better keep ran away before I hit you by the arrows of revenge




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Her Fake Love Lyrics Critique - metal song

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Feb 22, 2009
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hi
by: talitha

those sort of lyrics arent really my thing but I still loved reading it very well writtin

Feb 22, 2009
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Lyric review
by: Bri

Nice job! grammar's a little off, but other than that nice work

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