Help me on the title! Lyrics Critique - Rock/Screamo Song

by misterYori
(SA, TX)

Note: all CAPS are screams.


(VER1)
The subtle signs are what give you away
With every breath, I hear you screaming silently
I look into your eyes to find resolve
But instead, a demon's glaring back at me

(VER2)
You know it hasn't always been this way
Time's taken a toll on both of us
But what can be expected from these decaying bonds,
When all you do is fill me with disgust?

(BRIDGE)
The stakes are higher than they've ever been
And slowly drawn out, all this hatred we kept within
Sadistic eyes shine "Let the pain begin!"
Your fatal flaw remains UNFORGIVEN

(CHORUS)
Just GO, and leave my life right now
YOU KNOW, this sh-t is getting old
Who would've thought that the end would be so near? (NO!)
This barren island, why're we stranded here?
You may have been everything that I held dear,
But babe, this is our end, now won't you DISSAPEAR
JUST GO

(VER3)
Just like a labyrinth with no way out
I'm left alone both with you, and without you
Was this the answer that I've come to find?
Now I'll never be able to step in your shoes

(BRIDGE)
The stakes are higher than they've ever been
And slowly drawn out, all this hatred we kept within
Sadistic eyes shine "Let the pain begin!"
Your fatal flaw remains UNFORGIVEN

(CHORUS)
Just GO, and leave my life right now
YOU KNOW, this sh-t is getting old
Who would've thought that the end would be so near? (NO!)
This barren island, why're we stranded here?
You may have been everything that I held dear,
But babe, this is our end, now won't you DISSAPEAR
JUST GO