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Heaven Must be yours tonight By James Cook (lyrics critique)

by James Cook
(Viet nam)

(Hook)

Heaven Must Be Yours Tonight
wake Up somewhere in Paradise

Heaven Must Be yours tonight
wake Up somewhere in Paradise.....

(Corus)
Come has you our my Love
I'LL be waiting with open Arms
That's strong tender and warm
I'LL be ur Conferred through
Storm Right back were you belong,,, Holding
U tightly in my Arms......

Heaven must be yours tonight
Wake up somewhere in Paradise
(Corus)
Come has you our my Love
I'LL be waiting with open Arms
That's strong tender and warm
I'LL be ur Conferred through
Storm Right back were you belong,,, Holding
U tightly in my Arms......
Heaven must be yours tonight Wake Up
somewhere in Paradise........

Do what you like don't fight the feeling
cuz everything gonna be alright

heaven must be yours tonight
Wake up somewhere in Paradise
(Corus)
Come has you our my Love
I'LL be waiting with open Arms
That's strong tender and warm
I'LL be ur Conferred through
Storm Right back were you belong,,, Holding
U tightly in my Arms......
I can see in your eyes.....the way u
dance through night.....
without care tonight

Heaven Must be yours tonight wake Up somewhere in
Paradise.....(x2)
(Corus)
Come has you our my Love
I'LL be waiting with open Arms
That's strong tender and warm
I'LL be ur Conferred through
Storm Right back were you belong,,, Holding
U tightly in my Arms...... Jaycook2001@hotmail.com




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Heaven Must be yours tonight By James Cook (lyrics critique)

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Jul 03, 2011
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Love the Lyrics!!
by: Anonymous

Sound like old school Mavin Gay song !!

Aug 16, 2011
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A little rough around the edges, but it's good
by: Mary A.

It's a good basis to work with, :) but I think that it needs more verses and less chorus.
It tends to be dominiated by the chorus.

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