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Heart Lyrics Critique

by Isabella
(Texas)

7 Deadly Sins

7 Deadly Sins

You broke my heart with your smile
Your laugh made me cry
I knew you’d never look at me
And guess what
I was right

I’ll never know true love
I’ll never be kissed
I’ll never have a breakup
Why is my life like this?

It doesn’t seem fair
It doesn’t seem right
But I made a promise
Not to act out with spite

My fate has been chosen
My life’s no surprise
Because everyone knows
I have no love life

I’ll grow old and gray
Under a dying moon
Praying that somewhere out there
A guy loved me
As much as I heart you




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Nov 28, 2009
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Good job:)
by: Rose

I really like it:) It needs some work in some places and needs to be a little bit longer. Overall I loved it!

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