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Hazel Eyes Lyrics Critique -Pop Country

by Shintya
(Indonesia)

I was just a small town girl, Had a life of ups and downs
Wastin’ time hoping for everything that can’t come true
Yes I’ve imagined standing there, On my white gown in the church
But then i blinked and all i can see is the dark
But then the sun Comes out, Lighting my world and i can see
But as it come closer it was no sun but its you
And when you stepped into my life, i can feel my world shake
Thought it would be the end but its just the beginning

Cant deny that you’re the one
Can’t believe my life lies on your hazel eyes


(chorus)
Cause I don’t wanna go back, I don’t wanna move an inch
Cause I know that you’re here and that’s all I need
Though there’s a bend in the road, I ain’t afraid cause
I know you’re here, Everytime I look up, I see those hazel eyes

I began my life with you, never thought that it would be
Much more worthed than I have imagined
And when those hazel eyes lock mine, something inside’s telling me
Its like I’ve found the missing key I’ve been looking for

(pre-Chorus)

(chorus)
Oh you know everything about me, I couldn’t ask for more
I have all I’ve been dreaming of and that’s all I need
Though there’s a bend in the road, I ain’t afraid cause
I know you’re here, Everytime I look up, I see those hazel eyes




(bridge)
But the times I pull myself, I thought that we can’t go on
It’s like we’re hung on a breakable thread
I can feel the cracking inside, I can hear my heart’s cries
I can see the wounds, I’m losing faith

(chorus 2)
But then you said
You don’t have to go back, You don’t need to move an inch
Cause I know i’m with you and that’s all I need
I know there’s a bend in the road, But I ain’t afraid cause
I know you’re mine, everytime you lose faith
Just look at these hazel eyes

(Chorus)

I don’t need to lose faith, cause i have those hazel eyes




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Nov 01, 2010
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:)
by: Anonymous

aww..im crying..its so sweet..

seems like ur telling ur life story..

waitin for u to be famous..:]

ill be ur no.1 fan:]

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I want to hear this song 5 times a day on my radio. Get out there and make it happen :)

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