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Hayden Lyric Critique- Rock Song

by Hayden
(Utah)

Verse 1
Could there be more empty moments
Is there room for anymore pain
Can I take more disappointment
Or will it all just end the same

Pre Chorus-
Well I might know
That I'm never alone
but it's hard to believe
when all feeling is gone

Chorus-
Will I ever see
That you're not what I need
When will I know
That I'm better now that you're gone

Verse 2
Is it all just pointless
Is it all just for fun
Is it all just endless
When will my happiness come

Pre Chorus
Chorus

Bridge-
Well I've been wonderin'
When this all would end
When i'd find peace again
but i know now, somehow
it's all gonna be alright

Final Chorus-
'cause i can see
That you're not what i need
I finally know
That I'm better now that you're gone

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Hayden Lyric Critique- Rock Song

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Dec 09, 2008
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:)
by: Anonymous

great song

Feb 07, 2009
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sweet tune
by: foxster55

This is a freakin sweet song I wanna hear the the music with it

Feb 17, 2009
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Good Job!
by: Anonymous

This is really good... kinda sad but good. Did you write it about anyone in particular?

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