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Haunting Me - Lyrics Critique - Pop

by Brooke

You're all I ever think about
Whenever I try to distract myself
You stop me
When I try to erase my mind
And I don't get very far I find
You've got me
Wrapped around your finger

(chorus)
Where ever I go
Whatever I see
Your face shows up in front of me
It's like you're a ghost that's following me
It's like I'm addicted
Are you a drug or something
Cause you're possessing me
Every minute, every day
And now I'm afraid
It feels like you're haunting me

I don't know what to do with you
What's right or wrong I have no clue
You scare me
Do I hate or do I love you
All I know is that I need you
You've trapped me
In my own skin

(chorus)
Where ever I go
Whatever I see
Your face shows up in front of me
It's like you're a ghost that's following me
It's like I'm addicted
Are you a drug or something
Cause you're possessing me
Every minute, every day
And now I'm afraid
It feels like you're haunting me

I can't think straight
Your mouth, your eyes, they hypnotize
Is it too late
To give up my addiction to you
Set me free
Let me be
Set me free

(chorus)
Where ever I go
Whatever I see
Your face shows up in front of me
It's like you're a ghost that's following me
It's like I'm addicted
Are you a drug or something
Cause you're possessing me
Every minute, every day
And now I'm afraid
It feels like you're haunting me




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Haunting Me - Lyrics Critique - Pop

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Jan 27, 2009
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good
by: Anonymous

i really like your song i think it needs little or no improvement

Mar 25, 2009
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Very Nice
by: Amira Daleson

I like it, I can almost hear the beat behind the words. You've done a great job.

Apr 01, 2009
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Great Lyrics
by: Anonymous

I love your song; i think it has a lot of potential. I can really relate to it, so i know how it feels when you can't get someone out of your brain. Keep writing~ :D

Apr 01, 2009
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good
by: Anonymous

i also think this song is good and i can relate to it

May 30, 2009
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great
by: Anonymous

it has alot of potential keep working on it

Nov 25, 2009
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amazing
by: sarah

amazing its beautiful and painful at the same time i can relate to it cause ive been there before it needs no improvement beautiful keep going

Nov 29, 2009
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Nice...
by: Anonymous

I could almost hear the song as I was reading the lyrics. I feel I can relate to the song. If the song needs improvement, then only a professional would see it. Because I can't.

Dec 12, 2009
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Wonderful!
by: Anonymous

The lyrics are simple, but deep! If you had a strong backbeat to it, I'm sure people would love it.

Apr 05, 2011
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Definitely worth putting on an album
by: Melissa L. Feldmeyer

I love how you describe what's going on perfectly. If only that was on a CD...I would definitely buy it and put it on repeat. I can hear the beat that goes with it. And the title? I like it. I think it fits the song VERY well. Great job. Keep writing.

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