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Guitars That Won't Stay in Tune- Lryric critique -country -by Lonnie

by Lonnie
(North East Louisiana)

Let me know what you think. Be rough I can handle it. Thats the only way I can get better

Guitars That Won't Stay In Tune

You can bitch and gripe
You can set there all night
Complaining about what she has become
Suppers hardly waiting anymore and the wash is never done
Well you just figure
At the top of her agenda
She’s got a lot of things to do
Well her social life
It just hit nine
And boy it don't include you

But a woman that won't stay at home is like a guitar that won't stay in tune
Other than saying that you've got one well they really not much good
So go ahead buddy and bite that bullet go and get you one that’s new
Cause a woman that won't stay at home's like a guitar that won't stay in tune

You can fuss and pray
You can Pled and beg
But it won't do you no good
She’s' got you up against the wall
Gona see you crawl
Gona make you into a fool
She figures she’s' got the right
After all the nights
That you left her alone
She's gona take the chance
And do a brand new dance
To the music of a brand new song

But a woman that won't stay at home is like a guitar that won't stay in tune
Other than saying that you've got one well they really not much good
So go ahead buddy and bite that bullet go and get you one that’s new
Cause a woman that won't stay at home's like a guitar that won't stay in tune


Sunday, December 30, 2007 Lonnie Welch
silver eagle music 2005




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Guitars That Won't Stay in Tune- Lryric critique -country -by Lonnie

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Nov 02, 2009
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Good un
by: Charlie

I like it very good image of a Guitar that won't stay tuned and a woman that cheats. I like it cool.

Dec 17, 2009
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by: andrew

heeyy nice, really liked the metaphors man and really nice flow best ive read yet $

Oct 25, 2010
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Nice!
by: Giih

I love being rough..but you got me!!Cause I liked this song!!I can hear it playing in my mind..a great voice and an awesome beat!!!ps..make it longer

Jan 10, 2011
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by: Andy

like it man. it'd sound even better to me if i could do a half-decent country accent

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