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by Katie

Gravity, realese me
don't hold me down
let me fly away
I don't want to hear the words
I know you're going to say

let me escape
release me from this prison
prison of reality
reality hurts
so just let me go

Gravity, release me
don't hold me down
let my fly away
I don't want to hear the words
I know you're going to say

Hit me hard
tell me I'm not good enough
that I'm the face of failure
I don't want to hear the words
I know you're going to say

I don't want to hear it
so, dear gravity, realese me
release me from this prison
let me float away

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May 31, 2009
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Fly to freedom
by: Anonymous

You could write this song with something positive for the singer. Make it a song about the girl in a relationship that wasn't working. He was like gravity and held her down. Make it a liberation
from a stale relationship or even an abusive relationship.Instead her flying away from the words he may say, have her fly to freedom and a happy productive life.

You are on to something good. Read books about songwriting and pay attention to the hits.

Good Luck to you

Dec 15, 2009
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With the same sword they knight you
by: Anonymous

You could also try not plagiarising Coldplay, but that's just an idea.

Otherwise, good work :)

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