Goodbye Lyrics Critique

by Hannah
(Ontario, Canada)

This was inspired by New Moon from the Twilight Saga.

Life was so amazing holding your hand feeling your breath
You asked me to meet you in field one night
I agreed how could I know what this would be?


Chorus:
Goodbye!
Was all you whispered to me.
No regrets no sorrow in your voice.
Love life and meaning is over.

You said it would be, as if you never existed,
but what if I'm not ready to let you go,
life can't go on as if you never showed.

Chorus:
Goodbye! Was all you whispered to me. No regrets no sorrow in your voice. Love life and meaning is over.


Was that why months went by?

For ages and ages nothing seemed to matter anymore!
Life was a big black hole without you
all i could remeber was you.
Your breath. Your eyes.
Your obvisly crooked smile
the way you laugh oh so sweet.
Do you remeber any of this?

Chorus:
Goodbye!
Was all you whispered to me.
No regrets no sorrow in your voice.
Love life is over.