Gone - Lyrics Critique

by patricia
(cole)

Verse 1-treat me how you want
At your own will
But your driving a car
Without any wheels
Do you see the dangers ahead
Or will you ignore them
the plans that we made
Are you just gon abort them
Whatever you decide
I hope you know what you're doing
Cus I won't be here for long
Pretty soon I'll be gone

Chorus-after all the shit you put me through
I still tried to stick with you
And now you threaten to leave
Go ahead boy please
I don't care anymore
I've stated that plenty times before
And since you're too scared to man up
Im gonna stand up
Stop holding on
I get it, I'm gone


Verse 2-you're driving a boat
With no motor captain
But since you're a risk taker
Let see what'll happen
When you go out to sea
With no floating device
And you look back
for me to save your life
But what about
When my life was on the line
You sat back and watched me drown
Every time

Chorus


Verse 3-i think I know how this will end
You'll tell me we can still be friends
Or maybe you'll say you'll get your shit together
But boy that shouldn't take you forever
So im cutting the strings
Im not holding on
You got what you wanted
Baby im gone