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Gone Lyrics Critique -Country Music

by Rose
(Frankfort, Kentucky)

I am 10 yrs. old and love writing songs. I am working on a song right now and this is all I have so far. Please tell me if this is a good start, comment, and I am open to any suggestions. Thanks!

Gone
By: Rose

I remember your sweet smile
That laugh that I loved
Your beautiful eyes
Now watching me from above

The fun we had
It seems like a dream
But I loved you
and you loved me...











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Gone Lyrics Critique -Country Music

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Sep 08, 2010
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by: Kristyn

I really loved it. It was a great beginning and i think you should keep writing and finish it.

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