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Gift Lyrics Critique - Electronic Pop

by Blair

Verse 1: Your blood is like a bullet in my system
Body splits in two but I feel whole
Life is like a gift don’t dismiss it
A face is full of words
Yours I see through
But I couldn’t see far my eyes clouded

Bridge: It’s not fair what you take from me
My hands go cold and my body numb

Chorus: You said I was strong
You said I could run
To you anytime but you didn’t tell me
That was all a lie
And now I sink in the water’s deep
How was I allowed to think
Your body was my gift (x4)

Verse 2: You’re so strong
From all the people you’ve met before
I was new
Of all the bodies you’ve seen before
I was braver was faster and more charismatic
Than them all

Bridge: It’s not fair what you take from me (2x)

You said I was strong
You said I could run
To you anytime but you didn’t tell me
That was all a lie
And now I sink in the water’s deep
How was I allowed to think
Your body was my gift (x4)

Verse 3: Now I run I run
Throughout your body we are one (3x)

Chorus: You said I was strong
You said I could run
To you anytime but you didn’t tell me
That was all a lie
And now I sink in the water’s deep
How was I allowed to think
Your body was my gift

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