Get Well Soon - Country - Lyric Critique

I wrote this when my mom was diagnosed with cancer. Tell me what you think.

Jesus please speak for my mother
Give her the strength she needs to recover
For I fear that her time might be coming near
And I don't want to see her smile disappear

Into these shadows of death, so merciful
This can't get anymore hurtful
This house won't feel like a home
If I have to carry on, on my own

(chorus)
Let her conscience win
I'll get her out of this mess she's in
I'll do anything I can
Just to help her stand
I pray everynight for one dream to come true
All I want is for her to get well soon

Lord hear my prayers in the tongue of the seraphs
You like to hear them like the way I love her laughs
I don't ask a lot but now I need a favor
Please my lord do anything to save her

From the shadows of death, forever merciful
Don't make her close eyes so beautiful
Eventually we all travel home
But it's not her time to go

(chorus)

(instrumental)

(chorus)