Geogia Bailey - As One Door Opens Another Is Close - Lyrics Critique

by GEORGIA LATOYA BAILEY
(JAMAICA)

VERSE 1
HERE I AM,LOOKING AT THE STARS.
WONDERIN HOW FAR THEY ARE,
AND HOW HIGH DO THEY SOAR.
HERE I AM, WATCHING THE RAIN.
AS IT DRIPS DOWN THE PAIN,
OF MY WINDOW.
AND THEN I THINK...
HOW IT IS ALIKE ,
OF SO MANY LIVES,
OF SO MANY PEOPLE..
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AS ONE DOOR IS OPEN
ANOTHER IS CLOSED
ONE SAYS GOOD BYE
THE OTHER SAYS HELLO
ONE'S HEART IS BROKEN
ANOTER'S REPAIRED
ONE PERSON COMES
THE OTHER'S...DISAPPEAR
VERSE 2
HERE I AM,LOOKING AT THE BIRDS.
SEEING EM FLYIN SO FREE
WISHIN IT COULD BE ME.
HERE I AM,WATCHIN THE CHILDREN PLAY
IN THEIR OWN SPEACIAL WAY
AND HAD NOTHING BAD TO SAY
AND THEN I THOUGHT
IF LIFE WAS A FAIRYTALE
WILL ALWAYS END HAPPILY
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BRIDGE
HOW COMES EVERY GOOD THING
NEVER STAYS FOR LONG?
WHY DID HAVE TO MOVE ON?
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