Garden of EVE - lyrics critique

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Garden of EVE - lyrics critique

by James Cook
(Viet nam)

Hook)

Why did you leave? the garden of Eve,
your beauty must be for me, Sent
from the Heavens above, a prayer with love love....

(lyrics)

Your tears over flow into the 7 sea you go....go
your gates open up ,yearning for your touch, lets
kiss and make up, that's why i love you so much,
(Hook)
why did you leave? The Garden of Eve, Your beauty must
be for me,sent from the Heavens above, a prayer with love love.....
(lyrics)
It must be a dream, A angel it seems,or is it reality, far from gravity
your loving Chasing me, embracing me, Feeling your heart Beat close to
me, Shadows passing me bye, a picture paint in the Sky, a classic that
last for a life time, Forever to be my Wife, a missing part of my life,
to always wear white, Making sweet passionate love tonight,

(Hook)
Why did you leave? the garden of Eve, Your beauty must be for me,
Sent from the Heavens above a prayer with love love....
A true love sent
From only God up above.... above Love
By James Cook (Songwriter poet)
Jaycook2001@hotmail.com
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Jan 02, 2010
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good song!!!
by: Anonymous

I really like your song, but its sounds more like poem!!

Franklin jones
P.S I would like to talk to you about publishing deal with Sony records and BMI contract.
fnitty08gmail.com

Jan 27, 2012
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Anthony wayne Producer NEW
by: Anonymous

Hi James,
Working with talent on Inner City Girl. May have
to start a BMI publishing company to offer you publishing. It might take a minute to accomplish this.
As I have to get name approval and so forth.

Be advised that getting a song on the radio costs a lot of money (Payola). We dont call it that anymore but same concept.
Thats why there is always major label money behind songs on the radio.

Radio airplay is what BMI and ASCAP pay for. Airplay for your song has a better chance through internet radio.
BMI and ASCAP dont pay as much for these. When I publish a song I look for film and TV placements.
So dont be disappointed if we dont make a whole lot of money real fast.

You can put together a collection of songs that you have written lyrics for and had produced. Like Quincy Jones, he dosent play on the album but hires all the talent and produces the project. A compilation project can be distributed via itunes and the like.

Meanwhile here is Garden of Eve. This one took a lot of work as the guitar was out of tune and the performance not so tight.
Hope you like.
Tony

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